Peer Editing

Writing assignments
will be followed by a peer-editing session, during which you will read your
classmates' work and provide specific feedback.
Please
note: compositions are graded evaluations. If you are absent on a day reserved
for a writing activity, or on a day that a writing activity is due, you must
bring a written excuse, even if the absence is one of your first four. Peer
editing, like other classroom activities requiring partner communication,
cannot be made up.
Purposes
for Peer Editing:
- Peer
editing is intended to help you learn as much as possible from the process of writing in German.
- When
you read other students' compositions, you are objectively evaluating
their written work. You provide constructive criticism and helpful hints.
- At
the same time, you get a chance to see what someone else has written on
the same topic. You observe someone else's organizational skills, see the
same topic from another perspective, appreciate the way another student uses
vocabulary.
- You
can then apply these observations to your own composition, and make
improvements in the skill areas being evaluated:
organization
content
grammar
vocabulary
mechanics
Procedures
for Peer Editing:
- On
a separate sheet of paper, write your name, as well as the name of the
student whose composition you are reviewing. "John
Smith is reviewing Jane Doe's work."
- Read
your classmate's composition several times, and write comments about each
of the following skill areas:
Organization:
10%
- Are
the events in proper order?
- Does
the essay show clearly:
introduction?
development of topic?
conclusion?
- Does
the essay have paragraphs?
- Is
the essay cohesive, or does the student just list ideas?
Content:
30%
- Is
the topic adhered to? Are all the sentences related to the topic?
- Are
all required elements present?
- Is
the essay interesting?
- Does
the student recombine class material in a creative way?
Grammar: 20%
Do not make
comments on this category unless your instructor gives you specific
instructions to do so.
Vocabulary:
30%
- Does
the student use the new vocabulary discussed in class?
- Is
the vocabulary varied?
- Does
the student refrain from using English?
Mechanics:
10%
- Is
spelling correct?
- Are
Umlaute included where necessary?
- Is
punctuation correct?
Your instructor may
give you additional specific guidelines for the above skill areas.
- Return
this comment sheet to your classmate, along with the composition you
reviewed. Your comments will
be considered as part of your class participation grade.
- Students
are not required to make
the changes suggested by peer editors. It is up to each individual
to decide which changes are necessary.
- Do not rewrite your entire composition.

